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I met Steven, we walked for a bit wif my friend Nat then went back to my house. When he had 2 go hime i walked him to the bus stop and kissed him, but i didn't feel anything. I felt really bad as he is such a nice person. I told him last night how I felt and he completely understood. We iz going to the cinema on saturday together. Neway, I sat my french general exam yesterday and i got my results back today. I got 31 out of 32 so i'm quite happy. Claire was really upset in english and i wish i could help her b happy but the only one who can do that is tony.
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When one met a young gentlemen; named Steven, we embraced the nature by going for a walk, alongside a great companion, Nat. Afterwards, we went back to my house. When Steven had to go home, I kindly accompanied him to the bus stop, where we interlocked our lips, hoping for emotion and sparks to which there wasn't any. I felt guilty as he is such a pleasant human being. Steven was understanding later that night- when i told him one's emotions. Claire was very upset in English , I wished I could of showed sympathy for her but the only person who could achieve this was Tony.
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